1st Semester Writing Review

When I looked back at my google drive I saw stories that got better and better in my opinion throughout these few months in 6th grade. My first story this year was not terrible but not great it barley had and punctuation. But through the past few months, I have seen an increase in punctuation and better details. Like my multi-genre had a lot of information bout my topic including his lifestyle. Also during the next semester, I hope I will get ready for 7th grade in my writing.

One day a little boy named Noah went to school. It was a normal Wednesday when he woke up and got ready for school. When he got too class and he didn’t see his teacher so he asked his friends where his teacher Mr.Al and nobody knew. Then he heard this voice and the voice said I am your substitute teacher for the rest of the week. You can call me Yoda Then Noah turned around and saw a little green man on a chair it was Yoda from Star Wars. Noah was shocked he said and then for the rest of the day they learned the force with his class.

 

This is a piece of writing that I am proud of from the beginning of the year and I am proud because I think it is when I really started taking ideas of stories from examples and started using a lot of punctuation. 

 

 

Chris Pratt Blog Post

Chris Pratt Blog Post 

By: Noah Horwitz    

 

Pew Pew! Get on the ship Groot! Who is Chris Pratt? He is the guy who plays Star-Lord in Marvel. If you don’t know who Star-Lord is you are living under a rock!

 

Chris Pratt has been in a handful of movies and shows. One of his biggest movies being Marvel. His first Marvel movie was Guardians of the Galaxy. Guardians of the Galaxy grossed over 772.8 million dollars, which is almost a billion dollars. Then he came out with the second movie, Guardians of the Galaxy 2. That movie made half a billion dollars in 17 days worldwide (Wikipedia- Guardians of the Galaxy). 

 

So after all of that, you can tell that he is probably very wealthy. Chris Pratt owns a 15 million-dollar house with his wife Kathrine Schwarzenegger and his son Jack Pratt. Chris has a tennis court and a pool in his backyard. I wonder what he has inside of his house, probably has a gigantic collection of expensive stuff. (Variety.com) 

 

Since he has been in a massive amount of movies and shows his net worth is a huge 40 million dollars. If you don’t know what net worth is how much you are worth and 40 mil is more than enough for life.  

 

This is a picture of his awesome house.  Wouldn’t you want to live there?

My Dreamboard

Hi my name is Noah I am a 6th grader at Ayer Elementary and this blog is going to showcase my writing so let’s get started. Today I will be talking about something called my dreamboard a dreamboard in what it sounds like it is my dreams. My dreamboard only had 4 things and those things where. Go to Hawaii  Become an Engineer Be a Known Springboard diver and get a puppy. 

I am going to tell you the reasons behind the 4 things so let’s get started. The reason behind going to Hawaii is because Hawaii is a beautiful island and I would just like to relax in Hawaii looking at the sunset. Second reason is to become an engineer I want to become one because I like thinking of inventing new stuff and fixing stuff that people need fixed. Third thing’s reason in because diving is my sport and I would like to be Known about it. Fourth and finale and best thing get a puppy and why I want a puppy is I had a dog when I was 2 and it died and I would like to have something to play with and I love dogs and puppies are so cute. 

So that is my dreamboard I hope you like the post and there is a lot more where that came from bye.