When I looked back at my google drive I saw stories that got better and better in my opinion throughout these few months in 6th grade. My first story this year was not terrible but not great it barley had and punctuation. But through the past few months, I have seen an increase in punctuation and better details. Like my multi-genre had a lot of information bout my topic including his lifestyle. Also during the next semester, I hope I will get ready for 7th grade in my writing.
One day a little boy named Noah went to school. It was a normal Wednesday when he woke up and got ready for school. When he got too class and he didn’t see his teacher so he asked his friends where his teacher Mr.Al and nobody knew. Then he heard this voice and the voice said I am your substitute teacher for the rest of the week. You can call me Yoda Then Noah turned around and saw a little green man on a chair it was Yoda from Star Wars. Noah was shocked he said and then for the rest of the day they learned the force with his class.
This is a piece of writing that I am proud of from the beginning of the year and I am proud because I think it is when I really started taking ideas of stories from examples and started using a lot of punctuation.